This one had a really sexy NSFW prompt in the LHNB event. Sometimes I felt areas needed more depth and it got a little corny for me in places but I liked the characters of Jerome and Jason. Jerome fit the physical vision of the prompt for the story very well. I would have preferred a bit more BDSM in it and to have a bit heavier edge to the BDSM (considering the photo prompt). It was a nice story with some good supporting characters but could have cut some of the different family subplots to give some more BDSM (for my taste) and Jason/Jerome focus. If the prompt had been a little less BDSMy I wouldn't be so hung up on that. The early sex scenes were also odd. Considering this was a free story, I appreciate the author taking the time and participating in the event.