I enjoyed this free online fiction that came across a bit over the top in some places and was a somewhat campy read. My heart hurt at the differences in treatment between Paul and Kyle. The harm Texas caused Paul was difficult to reconcile with how he treated Kyle. I was pleased that Paul found someone who loved him as he was and that Kyle grew into who he was and his place with Texas.
It was an entertaining read...I wish the flashbacks would have been in italics or something. I would often be have way through them before I would figure out it was a flashback. However, hard to complain given it's free and I appreciate the author sharing this work.